Writer’s Workshop Homework

Students, we are making real progress with our ‘Breathing Life into Essays’ unit of study. You are starting to realize that you don’t have to have “the perfect essay” done at this stage (or ever) and that the goal is to learn how to craft an essay using a variety of different strategies including the ones we looked at in class today. I am proud of you.

For homework tonight, take your latest thesis statement and try 2 or 3 of the following techniques in your writer’s notebook.

Practice using different sets of evidence to support one thesis statement.
Read each thesis statement below and try supporting it using: kinds, parts, reasons, ways and finally, times when. Try to come up with three statements that support the claim for each of those types of support. If another way of supporting the thesis makes sense to you, of course try that way too!

Here’s an example of a thesis followed by ways to set up evidence that could support it:

Essay Possibility #1 (Kinds)
Fifth graders work hard; we study, we babysit our siblings, we help our parents.

Essay Possibility #2 (Parts)
Fifth graders work with three parts of themselves. They work with their bodies, they work with their emotions, and they work with their intelligence.

Essay Possibility #3 (Reasons)
Fifth graders work hard because we want to do well at school, because we want to please our parents, because we want to develop skills.

Essay Possibility #4 (Places/Ways)
Fifth graders work hard. We work hard in school, at home, and during sports.

Essay Possibility #5 (Times)
There are three times when fifth graders’ lives are filled with work. Fifth graders work before school, they work during school, and they work after school.

Remember the “Pie is good” example we did in class, don’t be worried if you can’t fit one of the above sets of evidence with YOUR thesis statement…just try the next one!

Wear Red… Wear your Jammies!

Students are being asked to dig deep for two fundraisers coming up at SAS over the next two weeks.
The first one is for Haiti on January 29th.
The second one is for on February 5th.
I know I have been looking for a way to help ease the suffering in Haiti in particular
so I am relieved it is being made so easy for me and will certainly be contributing as much as I can for these great causes.

val

Wear Red Poster

News from 5KP

Hello Everyone
I had a very rewarding experience in Manila and am already using some of the great strategies I learned there to enhance my classroom teaching. The conference was titled ‘Thinking Strategies’ based on “The 7 Keys to Comprehension” Susan Zimmerman and she was the wonderful presenter. The ways the class enhance their reading include:

*Using background knowledge
*Creating mental images
*Questioning
*Inferring
*Determining importance
*Synthesizing
*Monitoring for meaning

Thank You to Ms Sue Leary for substituting so well for me, the students were engaged and stimulated while I was absent and are looking forward to meeting Ms Leary’s mother, an author, in the Spring.

In class we are currently working on the following:

Math – We are continuing working through unit 6 focused on Data Organization and will be completing the assessment next Monday. The following skills will be assessed:

*construct stem-and-leaf plots
*read and interpret stem-and-leaf plots
*add and subtract fractions with like denominators
*add and subtract fractions with unlike denominators
*understand how sample size affects results
*find common denominators
*convert between fractions, decimals and percents
*identify and use data landmarks

L.A. – We are currently working on the unit Breathing Life into Essays by Lucy Calkins in Writer’s Workshop. Students have really started to generate more essay entries and are learning about pushing their thinking. Students understand the differences between narrative and non-narrative writing and are enjoying recording their thoughts and realizations about topics that are important to them.

In Reader’s Workshop we are focusing our responses on non-fiction texts, we are looking at the differences between fiction and non-fiction and ways to deconstruct text. It would be great for the students to check out the Newbery winners for this year and see if they recognize any of the books there. If not, they should definitely check them out as they will be in for a treat.

Unit Study – We are currently working through our social studies unit focused on Migration. Students are learning about the push and pull factors as to why people migrate and the are also writing a narrative about their own migration story. Hopefully they will have also spent some time speaking with another family member about that person’s migration story too as that can really enhance their background knowledge. Homework at the moment for this unit study is pretty intense, there is a lot to think about and I don’t want the students to be overwhelmed. However I do want them to learn to pace themselves and to feel some pressure at this stage of their schooling, but good pressure, not bad pressure…

Homework this week is:
*Math Study Links Monday-Thursday
*Revising and studying for next Monday’s Math test
*Completing a short and precise personal narrative about where their migration journey has taken them
*Discussing with another family member what that person’s migration story has been
*Small writing activities for Writer’s Workshop as ongoing work for our essays unit
*Reading Mr. Power and Ms. Yick’s blogs for links to good UDHR sites and then noting how rights were violated in the books they read in class today.

Other announcements from Diane our room Mom and the wider school community…

This Thursday January 21st, 10:00 – 1:30 is our Treat Day! Please send in
baked goods (cookies, brownies, cupcakes and rice krispie treats sell very
well) in individually wrapped portions. If you don’t have time to bake,
individual bags of chips are also a hit with the students. Remember that
the school has a “NO NUTS” policy and please do not send candy.

Thank you to the parents who have volunteered to help with Treat Day. There
is still room for volunteers so if you would like to help that day please
let me know.

EAGLE SHOP Chinese New Year SUPER SALE!
50%-80% off Selected Items
We are clearing out the OLD merchandise to make room for new SAS merchandise.
Sizes and Quantities are limited so shop early!
Track Suit = 100 RMB
T-Shirt’s and Polo’s = 20 RMB
Adult Dry-fit T-shirt = 30 RMB
Wind Pants and Sweatpants = 30 RMB

January 21st, 9:00 – 10:00 Library Lecture Hall – Counselors Café. Small
group discussion with our ES counselor/psychology team, Jeanine Merrill and
Ed Woods, and Jan Cantrill about issues that concern you and your children
both inside and outside school.

January 21st, 10:00 –PTSA meeting with the following scheduled presentation:

• Welcome & Important Dates (Admin, Heidi & Liane)
• Giving Tree Recap
• Andy Torris will present on IOWA testing 2009/2010
• Alicia Lewis will present of curriculum development and Atlas mapping
at SAS
• Mary Montgomery will present the Edge for Excellence campaign
• ES PTSA current budget will be shared
• George Carpouzis will present the Aquatics program and show us the new
pool

LAST CHANCE for Carpet Auction Tickets!
Benefitting The Charles Foundation and the Pudong PTSA
Pudong PTSA Carpet Auction: Every Carpet Tells a Story
In Partnership with Eastern Carpets and The Parkyard Hotel
Music Provided by the Pudong Middle School Jazz Band
Date: January 23, 2010
Time: 6:30 Preview 7:30 Auction
Tickets 150 RMB in advance, 200 RMB at the door
Tickets can be ordered by calling 6221-1445 X3521
or via email to jill.du@saschina.org.
Once again this year Eastern Carpets from Singapore will be bringing out some of their best carpets to share and auction for the benefit of the Pudong PTSA and The Charles Foundation. In the tradition of the Oriental Carpet Seller, Edmund and his colleagues at Eastern Carpets will be weaving in stories about each carpet as well as pertinent tips and trips on carpet care.
The evening will be a fun event for the entire community whether you are buying or just enjoying the beautiful art found in these wonderful rugs. We hope to see you all there!
Ticket Sales will end on Thursday, January 21, 2010

Have a great week and remember to bake for Thursday!! 🙂 Diane

Thanks to Diane for keeping us all informed and as she said…Have a great week!

News of the Moment

Welcome to Winter!

With the cold weather outside at recess, and warm temperatures in the classroom it is best to layer. Please make sure your child has a warm coat, gloves and a hat for recess time.

READING: During Reader’s Workshop over the next few weeks the students will be looking at Non – Fiction Story Elements. The lessons will focus on considering some of the differences between online media and paper media and composing alternative viewpoints of a selected text. The class will be choosing a variety of Non – Fiction books to study and read from both our classroom library and Elementary library. They are already well in tune with their Non – Fiction reading and I am looking forward to the discussions that will take place among my learned pupils.

WRITING: We have begun our unit titled ‘Breathing Life int Essays’ and I am excited by what the students have begun noticing about the world around them. Their homework over the coming week is to think like a writer and notice the everyday ‘grit’ of life around them; they are to then take what they notice and connect it to a bigger idea.

MATH: We have begun Unit 6 on Using Data and Adding and Subtracting Fractions. The students should bring home a study link to complete on 3-4 nights a week and are also reminded every day that they should revise over the lesson they did in class, especially if there were concepts they needed reinforced.

SOCIAL STUDIES: We are beginning our Migration Unit which is being nicely complemented with the read-a-loud novel ‘Home of the Brave’ by Katherine Applegate. Students will be looking at various types of migration and answering the essential questions:

Why do people migrate?
What is human migration?
How does migration impact the environment of where the people come from and where the people go to; how is one’s cultural identity changed through migration?

I will be in Manila for a Literacy Conference from Thursday to Sunday so Ms Leary will be teaching the students. She is an Elementary teacher and also a parent to one of my students from last year, Isabelle Leary, and has subbed for me before. I will be leaving plenty of work for the students and they will be in excellent hands. Although I will miss them (and my own children) I know they can be trusted to work hard in my absence as they are a truly talented class.

FINALLY…ASA’s began yesterday and will continue for the next 5 weeks.

All You Need is Love…

Happy New Year to my wonderful class.
We have started the new year, 2010, without Whitney, Rosa and Sabrina but with our new student Jason.
Welcome to Jason and thanks for a great first day.
O.K. 5KP…
Watch the video below and be the first student to comment on who the countries are before and after China to win a prize tomorrow…
If youtube isn’t working for you at home…sorry, bad luck this time!

See you Friday and remember…
All you need is love!

Secret Santa Revealed

Yesterday was an action packed exciting and emotional day.

We watched (slowly but surely) the film I am David. We ate a lot of junk food…again! We farewelled Rosa.
Then the highlight of the day was the Secret Santa Swapping session; 5KP were so excited. I think many of us also learned that giving can be just as rewarding (or more so) than receiving.

Somewhere along the way the students must have got the idea that I LOVE CHOCOLATE…where could they have heard that from???? Thank you parents for your generosity and the lovely food, scarves, decorations and yes…chocolate that I received. I especially enjoy the heartfelt words and home made cards from the students. They really are a special group of kids.

Here are some photos of the action that took place yesterday and now for the last time in 2009 I wish you a very happy holiday.

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Bon Voyage

Well, what an action packed final week this is turning out to be. I hope you have had a good chance to look over your child’s report card and IOWA test results. This was the first year that our daughter Hannah took part in the IOWA test and Simon and I were full of lots of advice like ‘just do your best’, ‘relax and enjoy it’ etc. Australians don’t tend to take test results so seriously, or so we thought…and then the results came home!
The conversation went something like this…

“Hey Han, how did you feel about the capitalization section of your IOWA test?”
“What?”
“On the IOWA’s, the capitals part, did you find it hard?”
“What?”
“Hannah, turn the t.v. off and come here please. Did you find the capitalization part of your test hard?”
“What? What capitalizationizationthingy, what? What are you guys talking about?”
“Remember the IOWA tests?
“Yes”
“Well, do you remember the part on capitalization? Was it hard? Did you finish it?”
“I don’t remember.”
“Try harder Hannah, you must remember, surely you didn’t finish it, your score was really low, I thought you knew capitals, you know capitals, I know you know capitals. Hannah, what happened? Why was your score so bad?”
“What? You said scores didn’t matter?
“Yes, we said that, and that is true, we are just wondering if there is anything you remember about the capitalization section that you could tell us about so we would understand your low score?”
“Nope, ‘coz you said, tests don’t always show the real score anyway, you said just do your best remember?”
“Yes, yes we remember, o.k., back to the t.v., don’t worry, well done on the other sections, yes, yes, good job Hannah, no problem, there’s always next year…….”

Ahhhh, the joys of being a teacher and a parent!

We have been spoiled this week with interaction from other classes. 5KP have had visits from 7th graders to discuss health and nutrition and we were also lucky to see Middle School Drama presentations yesterday that the class really enjoyed. This morning we had a great session with our reading buddies in kindergarten, making decorations and cards. As I write this I am in awe of the collective intelligence of the class (the kind you can’t measure on an IOWA test) as 5KP students engage with 9th graders who have come to talk about Stalin and his relationship to the setting of the novel ‘I am David’ I am so proud of these children.

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We are sad to have to say goodbye to two of our students, Rosa and Whitney. Sadly we only just found out Rosa was leaving after we had our party for Whitney…so we will have to share Rosa’s farewell with our Secret Santa party that we have postponed ’til tomorrow. Tomorrow will therefore be a busy day as we have P.E. to get the blood pumping in the morning, then the Unit 5 Math test to slow it down again! After that we will finish watching I am David which I hope to start after lunch today. Then it is time to celebrate our free choice writing, farewell Rosa, open our Secret Santa gifts and a few little things I have for the students.

When Friday comes we will all be ready for a holiday I think!

Please enjoy yours, keep safe, try play some games and read with your children, studies show that they are never too old to enjoy a good book read by or with a parent. Here are some great suggestions from Amazon if you get time for some shopping or happen to see these books on your travels. I just ordered this one for our classroom library.

Musical Magesty

Well done 5KP and indeed all of 5th grade on a smoothly run concert last Tuesday. You certainly looked wonderful and I enjoyed listening to both Strings and Band sections play and now wonder which one I would like to see Hannah pursue in 18 months.

Students, your homework is to respond to these questions by Monday under the blog title “Musical Choices”:

1. Should Hannah choose Strings or Band?
2. When you have made that choice, be more specific and choose an appropriate instrument for her (keep in mind what you know about Hannah, her size, her personality etc)
3. Write a paragraph giving a detailed response to how and why you made your choices.
4. Attach a photo of the instrument you have chosen. I will get Hannah to comment on the choices she agrees with.

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With only one week til our Winter Break we have a busy and exciting time ahead of us.

Report Cards and IOWA test results will be sent home on Monday.

We will do our Unit 5 Math test next Thurday and our Free Choice Writing assignment is due on Wednesday, with the first draft of this due tomorrow. Ask your child what they have chosen to write about, you may be surprised by their answer.

On Wednesday we will have a Writer’s Workshop Publishing Party combined with a Christmas celebration in the classroom where their ‘Secret Santa‘ will reveal themselves. Every child has been doing something nice (and inexpensive) for another person in the class (names were chosen out of a hat) and they have been asked to buy a small gift of around 50 rmb to give that person on Wednesday. In the meantime, desks are being cleaned, notes are being left and small treats sometimes too. The kids are having a lot of fun with this.

Have a great week before the break and thank you to all those who came out to support their child at the concert.

Fun in 5KP

What a great class I have? Yesterday I mistakenly cut short the lunch hour for the kids and walked them over to the middle school to hear a presentation from an 8th grade social studies class about poverty. Sounds great doesn’t it? Except that I was a week too late! So after a few minutes on the playground we came back upstairs and I gave in to the kids requests of “please, please, please can we decorate the classroom for Christmas Mrs Power?” Decorate we did, and it looks great with more still to come. Thanks to the parents who responded quickly to my e mail and to Whitney and Kevin’s moms who donated lights and more, we really appreciate it and I think further decoration and card making might be a nice way to end the week tomorrow afternoon.

It is not all fun and games in 5KP however, we are more than half-way through our interactive read-a-loud of I am David and the class are loving the journey. We did some investigating yesterday on the time period the book was set in and looked at the power Soviet Russia had during the 1950’s; the class are very intelligent and keen to learn and I enjoy these times with them immensely.

In math we are half way through our unit and should do the test for that on either Friday December 11th or Monday December 14th depending on the interruptions next week with the Band and Strings concert and the rehearsals for it. Don’t forget to come along and support your child at 1.30 pm in the auditorium next Tuesday December 8th.
Speaking of Math, here is a great site I found for ways to help your child in Math, especially for younger children or ones having a little bit of trouble.

Santa’s Workshop is on for the kids again this year between Tuesday and Friday and the class are welcome to do any shopping there that they would like to do. 5KP will be having shopping time on Wednesday at 11.00 am so place your orders early if you would like them to buy anything for you, family, friends, ayis, drivers etc.

I will be sending home a new scholastic news with your child tomorrow that is due back on December 8th. The turnaround is so fast because we would like the orders to be back here before the Chinese New Year break.

Enjoy the rest of your week.